I was walking to the bus stop this morning
when I came across a crevice in the road,
a break in the asphalt where a
single dandelion had decided to grow.
Because I am curious about weeds
and things that flourish when
they are told not to,
I knelt down on the street and
pushed my hand down into the crack
as far as it would go,
down into the darkness of
the flower’s sanctuary.
When I pulled my fingers back to the surface,
the blackness came tumbling out with them,
along with all the empty space left
untouched for centuries by the sunlight,
brought up by my presence
and eye for the hidden.
I always go looking for things
that shouldn’t be found,
secrets that aren’t mine to share,
but I’ll tell you this:
there’s a lot more darkness in
this world than I have
ever imagined.
See…I’m really glad you commented on my blog because after I read the nice words you had to say I decided to take a look at your wordpress and am so very happy I made that decision. Your words are incredibly beautiful, and wonderful, and I couldn’t be happier that I stumbled upon them. Going to read more of your stuff right now!
Readers like you make my day 🙂 Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback, it is greatly appreciated! I look forward to keeping up with your writing from now on.
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Yes!!! This is magnificent!
Thank you!! 🙂 I’m glad you thought so!
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Just brilliant!
Thanks! 🙂
I can see the whole thing and feel the crack and smell the earth. Fabulous.
That’s the best thing I’ve heard all day 🙂 Thanks! I’m so glad I was able to invoke those feelings in you!
And I’m happy to have these feelings. This is why I read poetry. Lovely.