Trivialities

And the pretty square houses

with their pretty square gardens

seem so out of place

in the foggy haze

of an afternoon that

can’t quite decide if

it’s dark or light outside.

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7 thoughts on “Trivialities

  1. Dark. It’s definitely dark-ish light-ish kind of dark.;-)

    I like these lines “And the pretty square houses with their pretty square gardens”

    This was how I felt the first time in a subdivision of cracker-box houses after growing up on a farm. You caught it just right.
    Alice

    1. What a mixed-up, tangled confusion of color this is! Light, dark, can’t make up its mind. Kind of like me. Kind of like us 😉

      It’s hard to tell if writing comes across the right way. You’re always here to let me know. So, so thankful, as always 🙂

      Natalie

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